-ping pong-Game Boy
-webcam-back to back
-baseball game-on spot
-bleachers-TV with game
EDITING GENERAL DIRECTION:
FOCUS IT MORE. PICK BEST SCENES. MORE IS LESS. FOCUS ON MEDIATION OF COMMUNICATION. COMMUNICATION TECHNOLOGY. DISCONNECT IT TRULY.
GET A GENRE AND USE IT TO COMMENT/COMPLICATE OUR MESSAGE. WRAP AND REFRAME.
SO, THREE SCENES:
(Take out movie scene completely?)
Notes from class
-inconsistent narrative? Who's communicating with who-is it only communication through technology that is disconnecting? e.g. why do Dan and Harrison shake hands after
-some scenes are more likely than others-webcam seems forced. More believable if less farfetched
-surreal "past" nice-liked the ambient
-was plot as important or not? didn't like it to have it read.
-more send up than critique? more than one interpretation. too didactic-LOOKING TO TAKE OUT A MEANING TOOK OUT FROM SUBTLETIES More questions than answers.