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Possible shoot ideas:

-brushing-but NOT-audio

-roommates-getting dressed

-shopping cart-laptop

-couple-TXT MSG

-movie-video ipod

-ping pong-Game Boy

-webcam-back to back

-baseball game-on spot

-bleachers-TV with game

Group meetings-SUCCESSFUL SHOOTING:

11.09

Breakup

Webcam

11.13

Shopping-roommates

11.14

Ping pong-ipods

11.20

Bleachers-TV

Video Ipod-movie

It's all peaches and cream from now

11.21 ONWARDS

EDITING GENERAL DIRECTION:

FOCUS IT MORE. PICK BEST SCENES. MORE IS LESS. FOCUS ON MEDIATION OF COMMUNICATION. COMMUNICATION TECHNOLOGY. DISCONNECT IT TRULY.

GET A GENRE AND USE IT TO COMMENT/COMPLICATE OUR MESSAGE. WRAP AND REFRAME.

SO, THREE SCENES:

Ping-Pong

Webcam Chat

Break-up Phone

(Take out movie scene completely?)

FINAL COMMENTS

Notes from class

-inconsistent narrative? Who's communicating with who-is it only communication through technology that is disconnecting? e.g. why do Dan and Harrison shake hands after

-some scenes are more likely than others-webcam seems forced. More believable if less farfetched

-surreal "past" nice-liked the ambient

-was plot as important or not? didn't like it to have it read.

-more send up than critique? more than one interpretation. too didactic-LOOKING TO TAKE OUT A MEANING TOOK OUT FROM SUBTLETIES More questions than answers.

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